A light of wonders
paints a rainbow in the skies
So does your ready smile
and that glint in your eyes
Maybe there's a story
or a secret to be told
Share a new adventure
or some memories of the old
Laughter tinkles and
spreads like a wildfire
Douses all the anger
and abates all the ire
Trivial seem the sorrows
and the senseless fears
When we laugh, silent
and hard, crying happy tears
Your heart
ceaselessly searches for any taint of despair
To wash it away with
prayers and concern and care
At times you come
seeking comfort and advice
Giving me a chance to
put back the rainbow in the skies
A thousand seasons
change within a moment on your face
You're a colourful
soul, many worlds filled in one place
If this beauty were
to outwardly glow
Heads would turn,
hearts would stop everywhere you go
To some you're a confidante,
a kind friend to some
Oblivious you're of the
blessing that you've become
A light of wonders so
pure and bright and whole
Let your colours
spread and shine on my soul
Who's this meant for? :P
ReplyDeleteI would like to start by saying the pic is so apt. Pretty, good feeling words always make me thing of a sunny morning.
About your writing, words just fit perfectly with you. Though I found some redundancy, for eg."To some you're a confidante, a kind friend to some".
I don't know a lot about poems, so i might not be a good judge of how you've done here and give you a sound review.
Thank you for writing!
Thank YOU for such a generous review! I'm glad you put in the effort to read & comment. Well this is more a song than a poem. More like an ode to every girl you look to in your moments of joy & sorrow. I was in a "sunny" mood myself when I wrote this ;-)
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